Reflection

This semester my writing has changed a lot and I am very excited about this. I normally would see change. And I didn't at first. But those who are in my life have shared how much they liked my new papers. And they would say how well written they were, compared to how they used to be. And I have to give some of the credit to the online assignments. Because they were scary but they did make me want to ensure that everything I post is correct and as much to flawless as they could be. And I hope that it has helped others in the same way. Because I know that it has helped me in more ways than one. I also discovered that I absolutely love technology now. And I didn't before because it never seemed to help me. But this year I have found it to be almost like a best friend to me. It corrects my grammar problems. It allows me to feel as though I wont be judged for my spelling or how I write. And overall this class is probably my favorite because it taught me to find myself. I found my voice through my writing and no matter what that's how I will always be.

My Presentation

Sky Diving

      Sky diving may seem scary to many but to Lyn its a way of life. She shows her timeline, from her first jump and fast forwards to her 1000th. To me she seemed very relaxed while she was presenting until she lost her place. I didn't like that she couldn't keep up with her own PechaKucha. I understand that t could be stressful. But she probably should have studied more. and practiced so her presentation was clean and clear.

        But I must say that she made me understand more about sky diving. She shared that went from a one time jump after college to a lifestyle of having fun in the sky. And to me that seems like the only thing I would want in my job life. Is to have fun each and every day and share m passion for my work with my coworkers. And I loved the way she put everything together. Because I was interested in the entire presentation.
      And normally I get very bored. So this was a new thing for me. she also allowed me to understand not only the excitement but the danger as well. Which I think this is very important when presenting.  So in my honest opinion I believe that the only thing she could improve on was the pause an apologizing in the middle because it makes her seem like she didn't practice. But overall it was very nice and enjoyable.